Monday, August 2, 2021

Alison's Holiday

 

Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialogues and to describe what we saw we felt.

I enjoyed reading the story and describing every little bit of it.

I found it challenging to adding a lot of detail.

My digital learning object shows my holidays with my nana.

Next time I would add a lot of detail.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Alison
    My name is India and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how you gave information.About what happened in the holidays.
    I learned that you went to the supermarket and you were excited.
    Maybe you could add a little more detail.

    From India.

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  2. Kia ora Alison
    My name is Jasmine and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really loved your hook sentence.
    I learned that your nana says yes a lot.
    Maybe you could add some more paragraphs.

    Mā te wā
    From Jasmine .gr

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