Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialogues and to describe what we saw we felt.
I enjoyed reading the story and describing every little bit of it.
I enjoyed reading the story and describing every little bit of it.
I found it challenging to adding a lot of detail.
I found it challenging to adding a lot of detail.
My digital learning object shows my holidays with my nana.
My digital learning object shows my holidays with my nana.
Next time I would add a lot of detail.
Next time I would add a lot of detail.
Kia ora Alison
ReplyDeleteMy name is India and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I really liked how you gave information.About what happened in the holidays.
I learned that you went to the supermarket and you were excited.
Maybe you could add a little more detail.
From India.
Kia ora Alison
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jasmine and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I really loved your hook sentence.
I learned that your nana says yes a lot.
Maybe you could add some more paragraphs.
Mā te wā
From Jasmine .gr