Wednesday, June 16, 2021

Mossie

 

Today I was learning how to add heaps of detail in my writing of my story because people can know that have that i've read the story to my story.

I enjoyed adding heaps of detail for my writing so people are interested.

I found it challenging to add heaps of detail.

My digital learning object shows heaps of detail and make it interesting.

Next time I would add some detail in.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora alison
    My name is destiny and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how you have put so much detail in.
    I learned that you can find so much detail and put it in.
    Maybe you could add more details and writing.

    Please visit my blog.

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